It's not bad, sounds pretty cool.
Personally, I would not mind if you got a better kick (sounds like default FL Studio ones) and add progression to the melody. After a while it becomes to sound like a continuous and boring loop.
Add some change in the mix add a deeper range of sounds.
You do place the kicks in all the right places though. The synth is also pretty sexy.
Would mention that you should master this, and make the kicks louder and the hi-hats more prominent.